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Ritualistic Paradise

Contributed by mujina-kun on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 05:51:41 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Torches burn with demon's evil
blazing in a fire of hatred
Igniting the demons eerie glow
The demons fight to be the blessed
A hellish fight of our inner souls
This is the contest of wickedness
This fight of hate is our inner souls
Humanity, we give no remorse
No regrets for unleashing our sins
The lust for sin, the drive for evil
Temptation spawns from our inner selves
There will be no end, no turning back
When we cross that fatal, unseen line
We've tainted our souls with holy blood
We pour it out like a rivers flow
Betraying the trust that was promised
All humanity is drenched with blood
For shedding the blood of innocence
We will burn for all eternity
Laying in the flames of our misdeeds
We burn in immortal agony
contorting, twisting, burning, grinning
Grin with the knowledge that it's too late
We shed the blood, no we pay the price
The world plummets into the darkness
As more and more of the blood is shed
More and more ignore the truth
The truth is that we're all going to die
WE did nothing to correct our sins
As this is the folly of mankind
It will soon lead to our undoing
A cruel demise for our misdeeds
All we can do Is search for the light
And stop the flow of the holy blood.

Copyright © mujina-kun ... [ 2006-12-20 05:51:41]
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Re: Ritualistic Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 03:48:16 PM AEST
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This is an excellent write

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