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Petty People
Contributed by
Wilder
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Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 04:57:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Petty People - Sarcastic Poetry
I hate petty people
They kind of make me sulk
As if the world really needs
All that extra bulk
I hate the way they go on
And the way they stare at you
You'd really think these petty folk
Would have better things to do
They bring up finished arguments
They drag things from the past
And they'll all do what they can
To make the bitterness last
They'll screen their calls for ages
They'll scowl when you walk by
They respond to everything you say
By making sure they *sigh*
They kick you when you've fallen
They mock you when you're down
They blame you for everything
From dawn til the sun goes down
So if you're a petty person
mumbling insults under a cough
Just do us all a favour
Turn around and just sod off!
Copyright ©
Wilder
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2006-12-20 04:57:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Petty People
(User Rating: 1 ) by NDean on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:50:23 AM AEST (User
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Brilliant end. Flows well, which I have found can by quite difficult in a humorous poem. WOW. Loved it. Its what I think.
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Re: Petty People
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:44:54 PM AEST (User
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you have a true gift for writing. i loved your write with how it was written and the concept. your ending was priceless. and sod is a nice alternative to a few choice words im sure other poets would have used. =] thanks for posting. |
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Re: Petty People
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 10:31:30 PM AEST (User
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I really really like this poem. I really like the way you dish it out; the rhyme scheme, the flow, the end; basically everything.
Nicely done.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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