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Sweet Irony
Contributed by
wizard
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Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 09:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How ironic for one to witness her beauty
for merely a day, when it is the
very force that fuels the sun.
How her tender smile and cunning eyes
seemingly deceive; implicitly unapproachable,
yet beckoning all in her wake to approach.
Her angelic voice misleadingly seems to
ring from heaven, yet she walks amongst us…
with heaven beside her, watching in awe.
And how it seems it is her duty
to lend the stars her supreme glow
for sailors, stargazers and poets alike to embrace.
And how could I believe in truth; if there
is but a single goddess who walks amongst us,
would she choose to be by my side?
I would have never thought it to be true;
yet when I glance beside me, there she is,
smiling…holding my hand, and my heart.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2006-12-19 21:11:04]
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by ruby_dreamer on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 10:52:11 PM AEST
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| This is a very clever poem...and slightly curious. I thought perhaps you were portraying this woman in a negative light, but it wasn't until the end that this was a dedication poem...perhaps this should be made clear in the beginning somehow, but I suppose it is meant to have an element of surprise? I like how you create her image in the form of an all-hypnotizing goddess. Like I said. Very creative...your crafting of words made it a delight to read. |
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 01:43:19 AM AEST
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hmm very nicely done wiz.
i enjoy it lots.
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 09:23:40 AM AEST
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Ah, the "sweet irony" of Love! If it not be, you have befuddled me. A gift and talent of the word "wizard". Beautifully and masterfully written, Paul.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 05:44:28 PM AEST
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Truly poetic!!
A very artful and clever portrayal.
And VERY romantic! |
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:18:54 PM AEST
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My dearest Paul, I know I'm starting to sound like a scratched record for I'm always repeating myself, but WOW~ These beautiful words come to us straight from your beautiful loving heart. I'm so happy for you hun. It lifts my spirits to know that you have found true love at last. You are a special and most deserving soul Paul~
An outstanding, romantic and heart warming write, but hey there has always been that special something about your work that touches my heart and moves me~ It goes without saying you are an extraordinary poet dearest Wiz~ Shine on superstar~
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
sue m
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 01:21:35 AM AEST
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Such romantic accolade you gift upon this woman...I can only hope you allow her to see all of this in your eyes, as you've allowed all of us to hear it in your voice...your words!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
~Kerry Lynne |
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:49:59 PM AEST
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Wow , this sounds like a small peice of heaven on Planet Earth!
big, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 11:23:54 PM AEST
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bro,
what else can be said?
another wonderful piece.. interlaced with a dizzying metaphoric display..
the 4th stanza is great-
well written..
B |
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by Loriann on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 09:09:31 AM AEST
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This poem touched my heart for some reason. It reaches out there to me in away I cannot expalin. You have a beautiful way with words hun. You are truely gifted in many ways.
Lori |
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Re: Sweet Irony
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 01:05:55 AM AEST
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| stunningly romantic!! |
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