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Golden Heart
Contributed by
wizard
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Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 01:38:18 PM in AEST
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So many days without a gaze
As sweet, as pure as hers,
So many dreams, so many reams,
Through which her beauty stirs
At last I’ve found a love renowned
By all who’ve ever known,
That such a queen with such a sheen
Could share her gilded throne.
Within my hold, her heart of gold
Will never cease to beat;
Although her love I’m not worthy of,
My grasp shall never fleet.
My broken dreams her love redeems;
It’s all that I could ask…
And if my days should lose their rays,
In her radiance I’ll bask.
Copyright ©
wizard
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Re: Golden Heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 05:17:53 PM AEST
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Wow Paul, how romantically beautiful. You have ascribed a precious masterpiece that will be cherished forever by the one whom these beautiful words are written for. My dear friend what makes you think you are not worthy of her love? You are a wonderful guy Paul with a big heart of gold yourself. Blessed she be for she has won the heart of one of the most special and wonderful friends I have ever known.
An outstanding and heavenly beautiful masterpiece ascribed through the magical pen of the very talented and gifted poet Paul.
Shine on dearest Wiz~
love, hugs n prayers ur fan/friend,
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Re: Golden Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 05:28:44 PM AEST
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very romantic and expressive.. I enjoyed this piece alot..
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Golden Heart
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by brew on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 07:15:54 AM AEST
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Yes never, sell that beautiful heart, that you have, Paul!
You always set ppl in the mood to smile, and shine.....You have a special gift, to give, and make one whole. What a beautiful write, for a special lady.
Your good friend,
Brew~ |
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Re: Golden Heart
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 23rd December 2006 @ 03:44:00 PM AEST
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Sounds to me like you got yourself a healthy dose of, " Wild Mountain Honey" & the gift to appreciate it's sweetness. Right on & good for you!!!
"Very romantic...", she manages before swooning...
teehee
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Re: Golden Heart
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by trueecho on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:47:09 AM AEST
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i like this alot..everybodys playing in the heart of gold band :)
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Re: Golden Heart
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 11:13:09 PM AEST
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That I've come so late to this bro, is at the very least, petty and reprehensible..( as are the reasons why)
and so, my deepest regrets and absolutely, sincere apologies to you Paulie-
The work is, as it's always been..
very well written.. flawless execution-
the second stanza.. divinely inspired bro..
B
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Re: Golden Heart
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by catz77 on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 06:22:28 AM AEST
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wow
awesome poem
catz |
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Re: Golden Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 12:22:58 PM AEST
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