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Drown Me In the Sorrow
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 01:42:17 AM in AEST
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Pull me down
Drag me under
Drain out my last heavy breath
Let me stare off
Into the new salty air
That I breath in
Hold me tight
Let me struggle
Wait till I am calm
Then let me fall
Through the water
No one will find me now
As I lay upon the sand
But now its getting cold
Breathing in the salty air
Covered by the water
Holding me closely
I hear your faint wisper
Laying on the sand
I know that I've drowned
In the sorrow
I'm fading away
Into the emptyness
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The_Unknown
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2006-12-19 01:42:17]
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Re: Drown Me In the Sorrow
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by shelby on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 02:37:01 AM AEST
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The way you used nature to describe the feelings of sadness is perfect, the water and drowning oh yes can be related to easily,
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Drown Me In the Sorrow
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 01:02:21 AM AEST
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| OH MY GOD JESS this is simply spectacular! God I love all your poems and can't really think of unique comments or w/e...but I love them all. |
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