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I'm so cool...

Contributed by Ratwick on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 01:26:04 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets

I'm so cool...sshhh..it's a secret
Promise me once, that you're not going to keep it
Lie to me twice, maybe then I'll believe it
Trip me out three, four more and I'll see it
I'm so cool...sshhh..nobody knows it but me

I'm such the fool...sshhh..don't say that, thats not so cool
Play the part once, lose one thats the rule
Play the part twice, minus 1, there's no rules
Become the art piece, exhibit the abstract, close the show, I'm so cool
I'm such the fool...sshhh..everyone knows it but me

You're so cool...sshhh..its no secret
I promise you once, and again, I believe it
Break your heart twice, not again, till you feed it
Lies you heard three, three words, do you mean it?
Sshhh...i...i...i lo...i'm so cool...o..you said it

I'm so cool...sshhh...it's a secret
Promise me once, or you'll never believe it
Lie t'meself twice, filter out, jade the reasons
Play the part three, four more million times,
Eternity lies patient, lies well, and you believe it?... HA! Ha-haha-ha-haa!

I am so goddamn cool...sshhh..trust me on this one...come on do it, its cool [(wink plus a smile) and you can damn well bet they were sly]
Because you don't need to know who, what, how, or ask why
With wit, dimmley, and quite simply put...
I'm...so...cool...sshhh!

Copyright © Ratwick ... [ 2006-12-19 01:26:04]
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Re: I'm so cool... (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 09:42:16 PM AEST
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This piece had me giggling..from a different age and in reruns I kept seeing the "Fonz" singing his to himself in the mirror...aaaaae

Good Job
Peace
Yang

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