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Nine - One - One
Contributed by
xxnights_childxx
on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 12:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Where do we go from here?
What is there left to do?
The end is coming near,
To all that I’ve been through.
Chose one way and it was wrong,
Then the other and yet still,
I feel like it doesn’t belong,
This void that I must fill.
And I feel like the world is spinning,
That Im losing all control,
That Im falling and never winning,
And losing value of my soul.
With him I felt complete,
Like I had found the other part,
Only one aspect obsolete,
But he filled the gap in my heart.
With you there’s something new,
But the time hasn’t yet passed,
And I don’t know if it’s true,
Will this love ever last?
Just lying on the floor waiting,
But no one can seem to pick me up,
It seems I’m always debating,
Whether or not to give them trust.
I seem to have left it up to fate,
The sickness has begun,
Someone help before its too late,
Before we dial nine - one - one.
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Re: Nine - One - One
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 01:13:15 PM AEST
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Very interesting read..I liked enjoyed it...
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Re: Nine - One - One
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by journey on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 03:17:23 PM AEST
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| You did a really great job here. |
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Re: Nine - One - One
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by lost_chadow on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 05:05:16 PM AEST
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| This was a good write. It kinda kept me reading like a cliffhanger...I wanted to know what the 911 call was about. |
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