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Love Hurts
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 10:59:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I told you it would happen
You said it would not be so
Then you went out into the world
And to my opinion you did grow
You used to be in love with me
And I was so in love with you
The love you felt for me has died
The love I knew was true
You told me that you love me
Like a friend, perhaps a brother
I tell you now, I love your more
Than a friend should love another
I love you still more
Than any poem can tell you I can
Returned love can be painful
But love unreturned can kill a man.
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sir_odd87
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2006-12-18 10:59:42]
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Re: Love Hurts
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 11:55:29 AM AEST
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very sad and powerful write.. this is a very powerful piece.. sorry to hear that things seem bleak for you.. hang in there.. there is always hope.. perhaps God has something else planned for you.. things will get better .. great job in expression here
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Re: Love Hurts
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 12:08:55 PM AEST
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| Aw, I can really relate to the feelings you express in this poem. Very well written. |
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Re: Love Hurts
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by an3n on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 12:09:25 PM AEST
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| tottally agree! |
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Re: Love Hurts
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 01:18:02 PM AEST
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Very well written piece of work...
Hope you feel better soon.. |
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Re: Love Hurts
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by lyddie on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 02:02:07 PM AEST
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very emotional i like it alot!
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