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This Time Suicide is Right
Contributed by
nothingness
on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 08:34:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This time suicide is right
I tried so hard to win this fight
But I know I can’t so I am done
I won’t fail this time I will use a gun
Quick and painless then I will sleep
Never again will I cut so deep
Just sorry to all those I leave behind
Wish I could share the happiness I will find
Trust me when I say it has to be this way
I know my selfishness will make you pay
But I just can’t keep living it hurts so much
The sting of betrayal and deaths evil touch
Taking away everything that made me strong
So don’t even bother telling me suicide is wrong
There isn’t anything else that I can do
Just sorry I couldn’t make it through
If you actually knew me you would see why
My only answer left is to die
So I write one last letter
Pray my new life will be better
Hope it ends quickly without any regret
And pray I am easy to let go and forget
Tonight I will find where I belong
Just trust me this time suicide isn’t wrong…
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nothingness
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2006-12-18 08:34:35]
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Re: This Time Suicide is Right
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 03:11:11 PM AEST
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Well I am sorry for all this pain that you have.
I will not for a second agree with the content and suicide. I have been on the recieving end of it and it is a cruel thing to do for all those left behind. I may sound a bit heartless here but........
In this life there will be bitter and at times more bitter than the sweet. Life is learning, and lessons. There is alot of pain, believe me I have lived my share and gone to hell and back but.....
there is always something better awaiting.
Embrace the little things, life is good!
If you are unhappy take the steps to move towards a better place in this life. Noone makes our happiness but US!
Now to be graphic here, I will pass on this story. A friend of mine decided to use a gun as well. He flinched and nooooo it did not kill him, he is now in a wheelchair and can do nothing for himself. Years ago a vibrant goodlooking guy honor student, bright future, athletic, talented and now...... a hollow shell in his existance that he created. Really....
THINK ABOUT IT!!!!!!!
No I am sorry but I will not invite you to take a gun and kill yourself it is wrong.
Peace to you.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: This Time Suicide is Right
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by Kazzy1231 on
Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 02:00:37 PM AEST
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| Well written & I know the feeling all to well! |
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