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SORRY
Contributed by
ahaynes
on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 09:53:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sorry
I am sorry
I am sorry for that time
I told you that I didnt , but i really did
I am sorry
Sorry for the pain
From all the game
Give me another chance
To prove myself
One last chance
To show you that I can understand
Sorry for the dirt
That made you hurt
I am sorry
But believe me when I say that
I am a new man .
Copyright ©
ahaynes
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2006-12-17 21:53:37]
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Re: SORRY
(User Rating: 1 )
by panman on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 11:21:28 PM AEST
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| I like it. I'm in that situation myself. I not only understand but can feel your struggle in your poem. Nice work. |
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Re: SORRY
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by Wilder on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 06:32:56 AM AEST
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| I like the way that (to me, anyway) this poem could have a double meaning; it could genuinely be an apology for wrongdoing all the woman you've known, but it can also be a "quickie" apology that could be seen as a quick way of getting out of future arguments. Good poem =) |
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