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sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 04:40:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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put your hope on the line
kiss the lips of time
and say youll be mine
cause when the ball drops
all will be lost
and gone forever
so help me now
to chase away never
sing me to sleep
and look into my eyes
say you love me
just one last time
your lullabuy
so bitter sweet
sing me to sleep
with tears in your eyes
the tide will rush in
touch us now and then
and we will win
the love of eachother
and time will hover
over us
so help me now
please you must
sing me to sleep
and look into my eyes
say you love me
just one last time
your lullabuy
so bitter sweet
sing me to sleep
with tears in your eyes
so now in the end
my heart to you i send
this is it the end
sing me to sleep
and look into my eyes
say you love me
just one last time
your lullabuy
so bitter sweet
sing me to sleep
with tears in your eyes
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
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by Saloni on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 05:05:25 PM AEST
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| brilliant!!!!! this poem nearly made me cry! |
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 05:18:31 PM AEST
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wow this is so sad.. you can feel the sadness in this and a great flow to this piece.. I like the layout and how this could be one of those sad songs.. awesome expression in this.. i really enjoyed this piece
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
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by Faust on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 10:34:40 PM AEST
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This poem is very strong but I think it would be stronger as a song.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 08:47:17 AM AEST
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A beautiful read...Very nice..
honey |
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