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*****
Contributed by
misspiggy
on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 12:52:14 PM in AEST
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*****
Prowling the street,
At corners she waits,
Wondering what the night will bring,
Pre-empting her fate
Caught in the headlights
Catching her eye,
She makes eye contact with the driver,
He drives on by.
Each night the same
At corners she waits
Wondering if tonight she will be wanted,
Wanted for a mate.
A man approaches,
Its time for action,
She purrs in contentment,
“Good kitty” is his only reaction.
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misspiggy
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2006-12-17 12:52:14]
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Re: *****
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by Ratwick on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 04:27:54 PM AEST
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Tis very good, and ir eally like the last lines..my only wish is that there was more of it! you can paint a very good picture with words and rythem
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Re: *****
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 06:31:58 PM AEST
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Geographically, you're not too far from me, these murders are horrific, it's like the yorkshire ripper all over again. A very good poem, nice flow, rhyme and content.
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Re: *****
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by lyddie on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 02:08:35 PM AEST
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great poem!
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