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Beyond The Sea
Contributed by
honey56
on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 08:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Over beyond the sea
My dream lies…
I dream of paradise
Skies of rainbows
Pockets of silver
And golden dust
Raining down from
The sky..
A magic mystical
Sense
Filling my heart
With love..
Over beyond the sea
My dream lies..
With such sweet
Emotion..
I dream of paradise
And the open sea
As its magical misty
Mist..
Entangle me into the
Beautiful sunset..
Over beyond the sea
Copyright ©
honey56
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2006-12-17 08:45:53]
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Re: Beyond The Sea
(User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 09:50:15 AM AEST
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A strange poem. I like it. Only thing i would say is
As its magical misty
Mist..
bit repetitive.
Ace poem
Nathan
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Re: Beyond The Sea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 05:42:30 AM AEST
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| very unique format. i really like this poem. thank you for reviewing mine and yes i'm feeling better lol. |
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