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Shadows of the Sun
Contributed by
thefemalemind
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Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 09:52:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I sit in the shadows of the Sun
Wondering if I'm the only one
In this dark and dreary place.
When I look into a puddle, it's my own face
Staring back at me.
My dilated eyes can hardly see
Through the choking fog
That's hidden me from you;
That's hidden everyone I knew.
Thinking that I'm the only one,
I walk the shadows of the Sun.
Hoping to find the place
Where I recognize the lonely face
Looking up at me from deep inside the puddle.
I strain my ash colored eyes
And try to see past the disguise.
I wander in the shadows of the sun,
Knowing that I am the only one
Who's lost in the shadows.
Lost in the shadows.
Lost in the shadows of the Sun.
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thefemalemind
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2006-12-16 21:52:11]
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Re: Shadows of the Sun
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 10:55:33 PM AEST
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Don't worry, for you are not, " the only one ", not here...among kindred Dotsi'
Dotsi'= Dwellers of the Spaces Inbetween
Welcome to our tribe, One who is, 'Lost in the shadows of the Sun' & Good job!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe
By the by, Loooove the name...Strong!
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Re: Shadows of the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 01:40:35 AM AEST
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| my friend, you know how to paint one hell of a picture with your words. |
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Re: Shadows of the Sun
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by Ratwick on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 04:33:32 PM AEST
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We are all lost in the shadows of the sun, but isn't the light of the eclipse so soft, its mood lighting! An excellent poem, I thoroughly enjoy it~ Thanks for posting~
Write On!
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