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should have known
Contributed by
maybella
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
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so you left me alone
you said i would be alright
just don't answer the phone
i'll be back sometime tonight
i trusted your words
put my life in your hands
you said that i was your girl
what don't you understand?
what don't you understand?
why don't you understand?
if i could get inside your head
maybe hear what you were thinking
if i could get into your bed
maybe stop my heart from sinking
i could make you realize that its easy to see
everything before you is all thats in me
and its all that you need
but you lied, you lied you lied
to me
and i sat by your bed
awake all through the night
waiting like you said
but never saw you in sight
forced away the tears
because i have to be strong
disregard all my fears,
should have known it all along
should have known it all along
why didn't i see it all along?
if i could only step away
free my mind of all the pain
if i could just forget today
and pretend i am not insane
maybe i'd grow strong enough to push you aside
cuz i know i've waited long enough just to be unsatisfied
and you just watched as i cried
did you watch me, did you watch me
as i died?
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maybella
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2003-02-19 15:20:00]
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Re: should have known
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by chantel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 04:51:44 PM AEST
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i loved it very good i would love to here it in a song put into music
chantel |
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Re: should have known
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by Maybella on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 05:17:09 PM AEST
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| thank u very much! yeah, puttin music to words seems to be the hardest thing for me, but if u have any tips or anything i'm open to anything :) thanks again ~ alyssa |
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Re: should have known
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:00:49 PM AEST
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Maybella
This is a very good write
Packed with feeling and hurt
Skillfull use of repetition
hit me quite hard |
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Re: should have known
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:05:57 PM AEST
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This is incredible! I just love the way it all flows together. I'd love to hear it put to music! Fantastic write!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: should have known
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by Anna on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:59:23 AM AEST
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| I'd love to hear it to music too! Wow I was impressed that sounded so good - should try sending it off! You never know you could be the next big songwriter! |
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Re: should have known
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:44:16 PM AEST
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| some strong feelings and so eloquently put together good write |
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Re: should have known
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 03:48:23 PM AEST
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| wow...this is so, so good... |
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