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You dont know her like i know her

Contributed by eden on Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 09:46:19 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Bake rinse scumble
Bake rinse scumble
You don’t know her like I know her
No. I don’t. Then…who does?
Is it all just some game? Where is the truth?
What’s the obsession with the truth anyway? Why do we need truth?
To preserve honesty
What’s honest?
Nothings honest anymore
Is that the problem?
No, that’s the answer
The answer to what?
Your question
So who is she really?
More questions. She’s bake rinse scumble, bake rinse scumble.
Repetition
Order
Nothing
Nothings honest anymore
Why not?
I don’t know
She’s standing
Why is she standing!
Because there’s nowhere to sit
Well get her a chair then
I cant
Why not
Because she’s busy
Doing what
Bake rinse scumble
What does that mean
You’re hurting her stop it!
I’m not doing anything!
STOP IT!
Bake rinse scumble
You don’t know her like I know her
How could I?
You’ve trapped her you know
How could I?
It wasn’t intentional
No
Was it honest?
Honest entrapment
Are you honest?
Yes
Kind?
Yes
Rinse?
How could I?
You don’t know her like I know her.

Copyright Â© eden ... [ 2006-12-15 21:46:19]
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Re: You dont know her like i know her (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 10:12:06 AM AEST
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an odd one, but well, what can I say? I liked it! I can see what you mean about the things going off in your head, it has that fregmented feel a train of thought often has... and only fools look for meaning in poetry... the only person who can ever undestand the meaning is you. Good, interesting work.

2sdy xxx

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