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Willing to Burn...
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 06:46:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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The craving to call her, "home"~
claims any who've moved within
While under their stained glass domes~
"believers" call her sin...
Vowing ones self to her~
meaning more to life than breathing
In the very blood she stirs~
with no intent of leaving...
For by all who've called her, "home"~
was needed to be learned
Why through time souls will roam~
for that which they're willing to burn...
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MisfitMe
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2006-12-15 18:46:14]
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Re: Willing to Burn...
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 07:40:12 PM AEST
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Beside ones initial inclinations...I actually flowed to Her & Home first as a great forrest tree whose bees, squirrels, birds and insects frolic & cavort... and then I realized how alternative that thinking is...
Well Done
Moon Maiden
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Re: Willing to Burn...
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 01:02:48 AM AEST
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There is so much wisdom within your writes.
You always have my interest.
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Re: Willing to Burn...
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by wizard on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 09:59:57 AM AEST
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very nice write...i enjoyed it!
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Re: Willing to Burn...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 07:05:34 PM AEST
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Kerry~
Your title caught my eye and drew me in. I am so fascinated and impressed with your writings my dear friend. Truly gifted, your magical words flow so smoothly onto the page. Keep up the great work m/maiden :-)
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Willing to Burn...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 11:11:16 AM AEST
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Truly open to the imagination, this write provokes it to so many interpretations that the reader must regard it as wise, stirring and ... fun to read. Good work!
wabl
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Re: Willing to Burn...
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 04:25:37 AM AEST
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See once again your write is wonderfully masterful, the words flow so smoothly. Thank you for sharing your wisdom with all.
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