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bends and breaks
Contributed by
plous
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Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
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logic put to a shape, or a semaphore that is a gate, why not kill to put food on the plate, always is like that, the logics shape, and how to get away, to break such a path, to love without hate, to hold regards before it goes to your plate, understanding actions and thier partner, historys shape, a figure eight, something that i cannot escape, to break pristine now with peace putting food upon my plate, my actions and time, so small it makes it seem sublime, to do anything with such small amounts of time, but i will, and impact it will have, with an open hand, no strings attached.
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Re: bends and breaks
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by Heavenangel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:57:52 PM AEST
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alot to the mind to this poetry,makes you think,
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Re: bends and breaks
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:57:31 PM AEST
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| Dear plous, I'm new here as of January. This is the first of your writing that I've read. I like it. Its fascinating! Bizzy |
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Re: bends and breaks
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by Key-holeGolf on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:38:48 PM AEST
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A thinking mans poem. Much to consider. I really like "historys shape, a figure eight, something that i cannot escape." I think the figure 8 is a nice link, well thought out!
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