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Valentine
Contributed by
blindchoice
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 02:07:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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Please take my hand in yours
And make me love you so much more
I haven’t felt like this in a while
Not since I last saw your smile
So I’ve been up all night
Working on your valentine
A box of mangled words
And a heart that has been badly hurt
Please take it its all I have to give
My heart is yours and no longer his
Copyright ©
blindchoice
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2006-12-15 14:07:04]
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Re: Valentine
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 02:35:54 PM AEST
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Aaaaaaaaaw...that was incredibly sweet. I hope the one inspired by is made privy to this declaration.Good job!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Valentine
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by lyddie on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 03:31:35 PM AEST
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This is very touchy! sweet n short! good job!
lydia |
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Re: Valentine
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 04:29:20 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful..
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