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A Tear Stained Heart
Contributed by
honey56
on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 12:35:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart, my heart is lost deep
Within the walls of my eternal
Soul..
Like a maze of elusive reflections
Trapping my heart so deep with
In the glass of mirrors illusion
My heart, my heart is lost for am
Afraid of you not loving me,
Afraid of what the unknown
Might bring,
My heart, my heart is lost deep
Within the walls of my eternal
Soul
Now I have to travel this old
Hard journey,
With tear stained cheeks and
Carry the lines of life troubles
Leading my destiny through
This illusion of mirror glass.
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2006-12-15 12:35:31]
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Re: A Tear Stained Heart
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 01:15:52 PM AEST
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I like the unsettling feeling of this poem the uncertainty of not knowing wheather or not to engae one's self in the throws of love. You weave a tight nit emotional net of ambiguity.
nice peice of writtiing.
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Re: A Tear Stained Heart
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 08:51:46 PM AEST
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It is so strange the human soul. It has the ability to love so entense and then go right into fear of not being able to keep that love. We have to just let go and lose that fear.
It creates jealousy, distrust and lowers our self esteem. Love in faith, not fear.
This poem reminds me again of this lesson learned.....thank you. |
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