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i hate you
Contributed by
Sparkz16
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 09:33:34 AM in AEST
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Tell me you hate me so i can go
Give my heart back all the beats it skipped when you came around
Give me my breathe back cuz you took it away
Get me off this trail you keep leading me on..because it isnt fair
Dont tell me you care about me if your not feeling it
You can take all those smiles back cuz they were fake
All those tears too cuz they were fake
Here you know what give and take back everything because the truth is it doesnt mean anything
you are a fake and a liar and the gods honest truth is i really do hate
you.
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Sparkz16
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2006-12-15 09:33:34]
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Re: i hate you
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by trackiller2006 on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 11:34:23 AM AEST
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WOW...very nice write. I can feel the emotion behind the words. Keep it up!!
your friend,
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Re: i hate you
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by lyddie on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 03:34:58 PM AEST
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good poem
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Re: i hate you
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by SilverDagger on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 03:42:30 AM AEST
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Your thoughts are well-expressed. I can feel your hurt.
The only thing which I didn't like much is your usage of 'cuz'. It lends a sloppy touch to the poem.
Overall, it's a good read. |
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