|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Better then Me
Contributed by
Rachel
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
I smile, you pass me by
And when you're gone I wish you would die
Because I know you're better then me
And you know you're everything I wanna be
That's life
'Cause I loose 10 pounds
You loose 20 more
I go through the window
And you use the front door
I can't handle this
Take away your expensive makeup
And your Designer jeans
Faceit
You're still much more then I could ever be
Because I'll never measure up
To an imaginary me
Copyright ©
Rachel
... [
2003-02-19 13:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Better then Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Heavenangel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:59:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| hang in there one day you will feel great about yourself!~Heavenangel~ |
|
|
Re: Better then Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 05:54:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
An interesting look at the expectations we place upon ourselves. Your direct statements make this poem easy to understand and with the unsuspected final line comparing and showing the two to be yourself, I found this poem quite enjoyable.
Nice write. |
|
|
Re: Better then Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 09:19:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Brings to mind,anorexia nervosa and all the pressures that young women are subjected to.
Those glossy magazines,full of 'stars' are pure fantasy.Take away the airbrushing,the perfect makeup and they look ordinary.They're just like everyone else,first thing in the morning.Just be you.
Well done,
Den |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
