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A Letter Written By A Boy
Contributed by
Channing
on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 10:45:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This is a solemn letter
Written by a boy
To give to a girl
The girl that the boy knows
Is his dream
This is a burning letter
To express the boy’s feelings
For the girl
Because he can’t
Thus he shall write them,
He just wants her to know
That she is his good feeling
His reason for breathing
And that he loves her
With all of his being
So much that he
Would tear himself apart
Bleed for as long as it takes
Until she wouldn’t hurt anymore
So that she will smile
And brighten the last breath
Of his life
For this is a letter of truth
Written by a boy
To give to a girl
So that she’ll know
How he truly feels
And so that she’ll
Never forget him
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2006-12-14 22:45:43]
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Re: A Letter Written By A Boy
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 11:27:26 PM AEST
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" So, I'll have to say I love you in a song..."
~ Jim Croce
BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe
Good job!!!!!! |
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Re: A Letter Written By A Boy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 11:44:29 PM AEST
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you need to give some guys out there lessons on how to melt a girls heart...wow
she's lucky to have you
great poem
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Re: A Letter Written By A Boy
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 02:29:52 AM AEST
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sweet,melancholi,beautiful.
Great write!
cheers,
-glass |
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Re: A Letter Written By A Boy
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by lyddie on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 03:45:10 PM AEST
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this is really sincere..good job!
lydia |
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Re: A Letter Written By A Boy
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by Teusday-Moon on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 08:46:55 PM AEST
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| This just very sweet and so honest. It really melts my heart. |
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