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Everything's Extacy
Contributed by
Ratwick
on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 08:39:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Everything's better
Everything's calm
Everything's Extacy
Everything's Wrong
I'm going to tell you
I'm not right 'n I'm not wrong
And my name is not honored
By soldier nor song
Save for my own 'n save for my soul
I am feeling Everything
I am your Love song
Sing it.
Copyright ©
Ratwick
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2006-12-14 20:39:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Everything's Extacy
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 09:24:23 AM AEST (User
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The poetic tool to process and reflect often contains the minds reasoning method...
Yet like Coleridge, Hemingway and Poe other influences chemicals and intensities alter the work to produce new turns around latent corners...
Your end did this for me upon reading:
"...I am feeling Everything
I am your Love song
Sing it."
I'd say its a strobe light on in the multi-colored dark.
Peace
Yang |
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