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Pretend Like It's Not Killing You
Contributed by
decibel
on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 04:06:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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if it was the wind i could understand
the reasons for your feelings and
how you can just sit with me by my side
letting the wind make your mind decide
that it wasn't me for you to give a chance
it was another boy from failed romance
that you wanted to walk with you
hoodies, hands and leaves, not me with you
cause its in the air, cause its in the breeze
cause messes my hair and it scatters leaves
i cant help it if i like you
i cant help it if i care
and i cant help it that you dont
want my life to share
i know this just means nothing
and i'm sure some day i'll quit
but i feel so much with you
its ****** hard to forget
that its in the air, that its in the breeze
that it messes my hair and it scatters leaves
but if i've learned one lesson
it would just be this
make sure someone likes you
before you feel like this
because its hard to go back
to the way it was before
after feeling like this
just friends can be no more
Copyright ©
decibel
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2006-12-14 04:06:04]
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Re: Pretend Like It's Not Killing You
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by Errious on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 07:45:35 AM AEST
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i like the poem - very sad and it really expresses emotion in a string fashion.
Well done.
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Re: Pretend Like It's Not Killing You
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by NDean on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 07:46:11 AM AEST
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A good read. Loved every word
Well done
Nathan |
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Re: Pretend Like It's Not Killing You
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by Errious on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 07:47:06 AM AEST
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soz - i meant strong fashion, not string fashion...
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Re: Pretend Like It's Not Killing You
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by maggsie on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 07:15:08 PM AEST
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liked it very much. my style is emotion too. it is me...
i have in my life known this emotion and remember only too well how painful it can be. love is not always well matched and loving someone more will always happen, just not nice to be on lesser recieving end.
the best love is recpirocated as i am learning about just now, to feel equal, free yet loved for who u are.
regards
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Re: Pretend Like It's Not Killing You
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by books_4gal on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 08:52:13 AM AEST
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This was a strong expression of a well known and unforgettable time in a life when the object of our affection does not see us in the same light of love.
Reminds me of unrequited crushes and loves from junior and senior high, with a much more mature and soulful understanding.
Peace~
Lori
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