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Love is Sweet
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Her eyes of blue expels her love,
The gesture flutters from above,
My Angel from a twinkling star,
The flaming wings upon a Dove.
Her love so fine,and from afar,
My Tinker Bell within a jar,
Whose lovely heart I feel is near,
Her love fulfills my reservoir.
Her heart is broken this I fear,
I take her hand,and hold my dear,
Within my arms I feel her quake,
The love of mine is full of cheer.
I feel her love begin to shake,
The love of love,and ours partake,
My love is sweet,and hers to take,
Her love is sweet,and mine to take.
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2003-02-19 12:20:00]
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Re: Love is Sweet
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by Heavenangel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:37:31 PM AEST
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| love sure is sweet & so is this poem,i enjoyed reading this write.~heavenangel~ |
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Re: Love is Sweet
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 08:02:03 AM AEST
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| beautiful...very nice write here... |
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Re: Love is Sweet
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by arden on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:15:33 PM AEST
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very nice. good wording awesome poem
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Re: Love is Sweet
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:59:26 AM AEST
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| You are just one of the "fairly rare" real poets on line. Thanks for being here |
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Re: Love is Sweet
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:13:11 AM AEST
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| Love is sweet, and reading your piece shows how sweet. I love this |
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Re: Love is Sweet
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 03:56:19 AM AEST
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Day 3 No 1
Very refined, I can't compare.
The nearest I get to this standard is "Wolf ....with hindsight"
First class poetry
bob |
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