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He's Charmingly Antisocial.
Contributed by
sally-heart-jack
on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 10:36:52 PM in AEST
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Our names stick, our combos click.
Today when you were sitting with me
the pit of me started to moan
because all your troubles
mirrored my own
exactly.
I wanted to tell you : the
suffer you feel, I feel it too.
We're both tortured with the same knife.
But I didn't say anything.
and those pills you take....
I don't know if you notice it :
we're so similar,
but still unique!
Just the two of us.
Why can't you see this?
I can feel your hand on my back.
Dreams aren't enough
Illusions don't satisfy me enough....
Copyright ©
sally-heart-jack
... [
2006-12-13 22:36:52]
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Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:05:18 PM AEST
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| You have something good here. I like the style and your message is clear and heartfelt....I hope he sees it. |
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Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial.
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by decibel on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 04:15:51 AM AEST
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| been there ; |
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Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial.
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by decibel on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 04:17:36 AM AEST
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| been there ; |
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Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 10:53:59 PM AEST
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awww! wow....he will come....if you guys are truly this similar..adn the dream is there...teh illusion will become a reality...someday
lovign teh rhymes!
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Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial.
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by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 06:32:11 PM AEST
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This is a great piece!
The girl I broke up with a while ago just came back into my life - saying quite a similar thing about us. It's strange when isolated ppl find someone with whom they just click - something they cannot help - it's just something they feel.
I like the style of this piece and the title is great! You're right; with such a person, illusions don't satisfy.
Great write!
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Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 02:25:43 AM AEST
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i love your style here, ...sometimes you need to jump out there? give a lill kiss? now youll have to write one and let us all know what happened,
love n' hugs nessa |
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