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feelings fade pt1

Contributed by boredoms_burden on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

our feelings began to fade and i see that look in her eyes
i feel the same pain that i feel all of the time
i kissed her lips and she held my hand
i felt her fingertips and we bagan to understand
but its alright i dont mind, i dont mind
we talked all night about everthing about whats wrong and whats right
we felt the same pain, i felt like i knew her all of my life
i could have cried, i should have cried
i felt her hair and i began to fall
i just didnt care i wanted her or nothing at all
i kissed her lips and we shared our lives
in her voice i could hear the painful cries
but its alright i dont mind, i dont mind
as our feelings began to fade a saw that look in her eyes
i felt the same pain that i feel all of the time
she felt perfect then and now she feels just same
but threw it all, i threw all away
i could have cried, i should have cried
io get the same feeling when i look her eyes
i felt the same pain that i feel all of the time

Copyright © boredoms_burden ... [ 2006-12-13 16:43:14]
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Re: feelings fade pt1 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 02:21:26 AM AEST
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U r a very good writer.
huggs,
emy

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