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past
Contributed by
TiNyOnE
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Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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rememberin the past
lookin in your eyes
remebering the old, the bad
the good times
wondering if feelings still remain
even though we both moved on... and changed
im happy with who im with now... but have some questions n doubts..
wondering as you look at me.. wat your thinking about
you were my first one.. my love and my heart
you were the one... who broke it... n mended it bac to the start
happiness arised from the smile you brought to my face
sadness came when tears rolled down.. as you said our love was too late..
he makes me happy.. but im scared to get out of control
he makes me secure... but im afriad to let these feelings go
im happy with him... but are you happy with her?
so many emotions begin my love and security becomes a blur
i dont know what im sayin
im full of doubt
i dont kno wat to think
its werid to realize when your true feelings come out
this is the first since i've seen you since our first kiss...
this is the first time i remember having felt like this
too many obsticales to call a quits.. too many decisions gone wrong.. to end it like this
remembering the past
looking in your eyes
remembering the old, the bad... the good times... wondering if feelings still reamin
even though we both moved on... and changed.
Copyright ©
TiNyOnE
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2003-02-19 11:40:00]
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Re: past
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 12:40:43 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. Sounds like there was (& is) true love there. |
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Re: past
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 08:57:12 PM AEST
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Strong emotions here. Great job!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: past
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by Apartment213 on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 11:36:45 PM AEST
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| hey great poem brings back memories reminds me of a girl.....well written keep it up!! |
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