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Trapped
Contributed by
errious
on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 03:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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With no place to go
No-one to run to
Nobody to talk to
You’re trapped
Escape seems impossible
Spiralling downwards in a
Black tunnel
Backed into a corner
Lost in a crowd
Trying to reach the unreachable
To win the unwinnable
To do the undoable
Trying to climb neverending walls
Like a spider
Stuck
In a sink
Waiting
To be thrown into the blackness
With no escape
Where everyone's so distant
Yet
So close...
So confused
Yet so understanding and
You’re falling
Again
Falling never to return
From the blackness of
Pain
and hatred
But you’re so calm
Yet Burning Inside
As the walls of the room
Begin to close in on
You...
Closer...
You kneel and cry
Begging for understanding and
Hope
Blending in
Sinking into non-existance
Trapped with
No hope of escape
Trapped...
You sit... you wait... and you sleep
Copyright ©
errious
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2006-12-13 15:47:55]
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Re: Trapped
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by lyddie on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:59:01 PM AEST
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i really like this poem good job
lydia:) |
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Re: Trapped
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by NDean on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 07:40:25 AM AEST
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Another good emotional poem from Tom.
I love this poem. I feels like falling but also refelcts heavy breathing you feel with claustrophobia e.t.c.
Well Done
Nathan |
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Re: Trapped
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by BOZEEN on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 01:00:00 PM AEST
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| GREAT POEM,I FELT LIKE THE SPIDER. |
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