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Life Is Conflicting
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
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Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 01:29:21 PM in AEST
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life is a shadow, and a gimmick, why do we try if all we do is die, eventually we must give up the lies and move on to the skies, in heaven or below we just can't decide
so when does it end oh why does it not, because all we shall do is rot without knowing who is the one we needed the most, i can't despair for with knowing that soon i am safe and undone my knowing of who the one that is to say where am i going.
The Confliction is grow and nobody is knowing…
What Path Can I Trust?
~The Raven
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2006-12-13 13:29:21]
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Re: Life Is Conflicting
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by Errious on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:02:50 PM AEST
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A very deep poem. Really gets you thinking. Cool.
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Re: Life Is Conflicting
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by Errious on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:07:17 PM AEST
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A very deep poem. Really gets you thinking. Cool.
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Re: Life Is Conflicting
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:14:08 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. i like the emotions expressed in this.. and that is a great question.. everyone asks where they are going and why they are here.. those are some of lifes greatest mystery.. but we all have a purpose
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