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Friends
Contributed by
lyddie
on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:01:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Together we are careless
and caring at the same time.
We dont care if people dont like our personalities,
or look down on us.
We are very passionate towards
other peoples thoughts and feelings.
Together we can gently whisp into a soul.
We use our crescent touches
and our sweet whispers of insanity.
Together when the darkness falls.
We will be there for those who have confused reality
with their lost dreams.
We will be there to comfort the disturbed
and disturb the comfortable.
Together we destroy people's suicidal remedies because
We believe in non-existing time.
We see no reason to rush because everyone
will have their day to die.
We are just living the lifes
We were born to live!
BY: Lydia Badgwell
Copyright ©
lyddie
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2006-12-12 22:01:03]
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Re: Friends
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:22:47 PM AEST
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Hey Lydia, a big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope you enjoy it here.
A great first submission. Well done~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Friends
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 12:59:20 AM AEST
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Here Here I second that and enjoyed you rhymes flow. Your subject matter has scope and really address a painful subject. Thank You for your brave post.
Peae
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Re: Friends
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by myloveispure on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 09:23:30 AM AEST
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| great first write. |
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Re: Friends
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by Xbxg32000 on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:14:32 PM AEST
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| Welcome to your-poetry.com. I enjoyed the poem, keep it up. |
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