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Safeguard
Contributed by
lost_chadow
on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 08:40:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How...dare...you
tell me that gangsta and I are just alike?
I see you come in contact with these fools
and I know you see me fighting not to be cruel
but you know what...you're right
I can't even win this fight
because even if I gave you my life
my tombstone would still read "Trifling"
So tell me, why am I even trying
What new sickness touches my brain
that has me wishing you pain?
'Cause I swear I'll twist my head off
if it would just make you safe.
So go ahead and tell me what's wrong the male race
Tell me about how I steal your heart
just to crush it in your face.
Tell me about how I pretend to be abstinent
just so I can tell my homeboys how I took you to my place
Tell me no matter how hard I try to help you,
it will only be running game.
Tell me no matter how much I love you
the only thing I deserve is shame
'Cause even though you take my hugs and kisses
and throw them away, just dismiss 'em
I still mean it when I say
I'd erase myself from time and space
if I thought it would keep you safe.
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lost_chadow
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2006-12-12 20:40:56]
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Re: Safeguard
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by BSteel on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 02:14:40 PM AEST
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i get the essence though choppy at times
this is one of the more hearfelt and emotional pieces ive come in contact lately,
thanks for sharing,
sincerly,
brian |
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Re: Safeguard
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 09:19:29 AM AEST
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There seems to be some very heartfelt, but careless, devotion to a lifestyle the may not hold to the vanguards of stability. Second read of your work and I'm intrigued. Read more later.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Safeguard
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 10:25:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing your kind heart.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Safeguard
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by thebrokenyouth on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 01:07:03 PM AEST
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well. all the comments under me are using big words that i truly need a dictionary to understand.
so im gonna make this easy for the both of us.
you were right. this is like mine.
i feel the same way. i wanted revenge.
then it changed. i dont know what to say.
breathtaking. you captured th hearts of alot of people.
and they dont even know who you are.
they like you for you and i love that about your work.
its original.
~remy |
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