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BLeeding Valentine
Contributed by
RavenEnsued
on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 05:19:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It doesn’t matter anymore
How much I hurt and feel
There never is anyone there
To help me completely heal
So what if I’m supposed to be happy
To laugh, smile, and not cry
Oh, haven’t you noticed?
I’ve just died a little more inside
There’s blood all over the paper
It’s as dark as this black ink
Just ***** off, don’t worry
I left the razor in the sink
My scars won’t heal the way I want them to
But it’s only because of you
Don’t worry it doesn’t hurt as much
As it used to when I thought about you
Look in my trash can, the broken razors
And hope you don’t miss the red-stained toilet paper
I’m on my fourth one, God I’m on a roll,
Let’s just hope that they don’t call poison control
But why should I waste my time
Writing this stupid rhyme?
Oh, look there he goes,
My bleeding Valentine.
Copyright ©
RavenEnsued
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2006-12-12 17:19:28]
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Re: BLeeding Valentine
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 05:53:39 PM AEST
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wow very sad and powerful write.. you can feel the sadness in this.. awesome job in expression and i loved the flow thanks for sharing
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Re: BLeeding Valentine
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by lyddie on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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very good .i really enjoyed :)
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Re: BLeeding Valentine
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by Xbxg32000 on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:12:27 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem. I really enjoyed it :). |
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