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You Silly Beast Monkey
Contributed by
Ratwick
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Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 04:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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What was that she said?
Jag alska dig!
O, ya, I remember that day,
Two weeks, two months, two years, whatever
I shant complain.
Jag alska dig oxsaw! See?
Those words I have also played,
Pause....
Repeat...Jag alska dig!
Du foenig yurfurfutta appah!
Yes! I called you a monkey..
A silly beast monkey,
I thought you were Swedish,
You thought I was funny.
"You look enightened"
"I am, and I have been"
I said then, when I was not frightened.
"You have shown me!"
"And you have saved me!"
If only we could have saved ourselves,
Before your plane left, before we said our loves..
Im sorry.
Jag Alska Dig
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Ratwick
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Re: You Silly Beast Monkey
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 11:41:59 PM AEST
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This is a fine word play and works even if you one is not versed in Sweedish....
Thank You for another way to say "I Love You" we can never have enough of that...
Peace
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Re: You Silly Beast Monkey
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 05:49:47 PM AEST
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A very sad ending~
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Thanks for teaching us a new way to say "I love you" in another language. I look forward to visiting your pages.
Take care,
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Re: You Silly Beast Monkey
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 10:23:41 PM AEST
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aww its a beautiful story, maybe a sad ending, but a story you can look back on fondly
thanks for one more way to say i love you...always great!
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