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lies in light
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Shadows play
Up in the light
Fading colors
Within our sight
Daytime snatches
Of darkest night
Hidden in shade
In desperate plight
Sorrows bidden
In wrongful due
An aching need
In soulful hue
Saddened hearts
Jaded and blue
Left to wonder
Which is true
Longing voices
crying out loud
Wishful of sounding
Soulful and proud
And left to wanting
Weeping head bowed
Selfish sorrow
So seldom allowed
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2003-02-19 10:00:00]
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Re: lies in light
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:04:04 PM AEST
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| brillant, great write, short and to the point |
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Re: lies in light
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:18:32 PM AEST
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| This was a dark poem but very well written nice job! Christina |
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Re: lies in light
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:38:58 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so good...i dont really know what to say...i love it... |
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Re: lies in light
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by mystical_illusion on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 04:50:51 PM AEST
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Very well written, i enjoyed reading it alot
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Re: lies in light
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:08:28 PM AEST
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Simple and powerful write wordsey. Enjoy all your work.
Russ |
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