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Indoctrinate
Contributed by
noloveinrobotland
on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 02:02:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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And then you are the words in your prose
Your song split into four tormented verses
Your veins tangled between the dark wind
Blowing through the words you wrote yourself
The words from your soul
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But you cannot let your feast burn,
You say as you close the door.
And such a glorious feast it was
Pig’s heart, crackling with the very essence
You forbid yourself from enjoying
Because every time you take a bite,
You know you demolish a piece of me
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L, you say, is for the language we speak
Different from everyone else, but not the same
O is for the object of your affection, namely me
But only in my other forms
V is for the venom, that you wear around your neck
Only on special occasions
And E, you say, E is for the elaborate reasons we can’t be together.
And then it’s time for you to say goodbye, because that’s what you always do.
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And then I say that you are my everything
Captivating, you say, but not truthful
And then it is the end, once again
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Re: Indoctrinate
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by Ratwick on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 04:34:10 AM AEST
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I really liked your poem! I went to check out your other stuff and see you're new too! Thanks for posting that, and I look forward to more!
Write On!
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Re: Indoctrinate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 07:25:42 AM AEST
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i enjoyed the way this piece has been arranged...especially the beginning.
Also, some awesome metaphors.
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Re: Indoctrinate
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by NDean on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 07:37:09 AM AEST
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A strange poem but that makes it more enjoyable.
Well Done
Keep Writing
And welcome to YPDC.
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