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Line
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 05:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I am a line.
Nothing more, Nothing less.
I run straight and parallel
Next to the stream of life.
I continue forever,
Never crossing with another.
Just running straight onwards,
Never stopping.
Once, I caught a glimpse,
Just one glimpse of those beside me.
So happy and carefree,
Not haunted by endless solitude.
They don't even know I exist.
But why would they?
I am a line,
Just a line.
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2006-12-11 17:07:35]
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Re: Line
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 06:45:38 PM AEST
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Excellent to stretch the point. Your poem has punch and many things hang to dry on its infinte capacity.
The reader intersects only to get in touch with their own straight and narrow.
Well Done.
Peace
Yangdantien
PS May I play fully add 'How You Doin'?
Wow, thats how much I liked this.... |
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Re: Line
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 06:14:20 PM AEST
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In a pm my dearest friend Yangdantien pointed out your poem to me. He suggested I read it and I'm so glad he did.
Wow, your poem is extraordinary~ I felt a connection through your words. You have penned in great detail what I could not. Your poem speaks volumes. Thanks so much for sharing with us your outstanding work~
Take care,
big hugs,
sue m |
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