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Day of Rage
Contributed by
trackiller2006
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Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:29:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It feels like I've been on a long journey.
Fells like I've waited all this time, for that one moment.
Was it God's will or was it my own?
I swear I heard a voice telling me...awake!
Among the waves I can bring back memories.
A sacred tree calls upon me.
Beyond dreams, beyond memories...I realize I am myself.
And we find each other...
Oh, if all we can do is be disheartened by what is to come.
And wait for this pathetic feast to end.
Our history fading away, then what is there left of us to expect now?
Awake...among the waves I can bring back memories...somewhere among distant memories.
Something awakens inside of me...
Will it learn love...or tenderness?
Then will all this finally end?
You were always close to me, right there by my side.
I swear you have always been...
When the sin covers us with its song the land will suffer.
You must understand...let us not forget.
We must never forget.
Heaven, land, sea, and sun are life.
Let us not forget when the color of evil fills the land we will see the Day of Rage.
And everything will end...
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2006-12-11 10:29:46]
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Re: Day of Rage
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:50:37 AM AEST
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wow very powerful write.. i enjoyed this piece and i like the flow..
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Re: Day of Rage
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by NDean on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 02:50:16 PM AEST
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I love this poem.
It can be interpretted in so many ways... I think LOL
Anyway
Cool Poem
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Re: Day of Rage
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by Ratwick on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 06:50:24 PM AEST
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I like the optimism that still kicking in there! But its true, I think that the day of rage has come for me already, and a glimmer of hope seems distant and foreign, but is welcome none the less, and should be shared with everyone! Excelent write!
Write On!
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Re: Day of Rage
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:11:56 AM AEST
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| another brilliant write. beautiful and powerfull. loved it. |
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