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I Make Me Sick
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 09:22:34 AM in AEST
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There is was, what I have been waiting for, what I feared the most, but knew all along was coming, so, there it is, dangling in front of my face, in my hands, in every waking moment, taunting me, pulling at my skin, puncturing my heart with sharpened pins, what it is, is still unknown, completely, the intention is clear, and that is enough to kill me, it sits cold, left frozen, jaw dropping, effects are depressing, pill popping, my body I am neglecting, to ease the truth, let is sink in slowly, to come to terms, with wasted time, not knowing, there it is, you said it so well, so eloquently described, so gentility alive, so gracefully in stride, I have the lost the love of my life, and now I must struggle to find, all those things which make sense only at night.
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Re: I Make Me Sick
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by Ratwick on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 07:09:22 PM AEST
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Isnt it funny how when we've lost the Truth, we search for it again in the darkest places, and when the lights come on to show you, we scurry to what we may never know?
Or somethinglike that anyways.
I like that poem alot.
Thanks!
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Re: I Make Me Sick
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by elle on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 09:50:18 PM AEST
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What we fear the most we literally draw to us...bringing it close enough to pull at our skin...wonder why we fear, could it be the indicators. I really like the way you express yourself.
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