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A Cool Change in Summer
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 07:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Today was a strange day
after a week of growing heat
the wind changed a refreshing change
and today you and I had to meet
Such trivial things we mortals do
now, with puffy eyes, you came back
you talked the small thoughts of my heart
and apologised for all things you lack
The breeze came again
as it always did with you
and for once you let me in
emotional moments – all too few
But you plead again
for your tears not to fall like rain
like water off a ducks back
just listen, listen to you inner pain
Yet inside I know things I won’t say
this is indeed a strange new day
In my secret and fragile heart
I know you were my source of art
You made me the best I could
for you, anything? I would
But for once I’m the silent one
trying to tell you that you must run…
Such a strange and confusing day
inner things seem to live anew
yet I have so little left to say
now, finally before the honest you
And still, we manage to find a way
we say things beneath a cover
this is a refreshing and wonderful day
we cannot live without the other.
11/12/06
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2006-12-11 07:49:15]
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Re: A Cool Change in Summer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 04:34:00 PM AEST
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still waiting for her i see...
isnt that always the case?? you ahve so much to say and when you finally get the chance..you dont..
i'm liking teh rhyme scheme in this entire poem and the way you portray your feelings |
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Re: A Cool Change in Summer
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:57:20 PM AEST
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| I am sure you must be very confused indeed! A great write, you did well in stating your feelings, and I really like the imagery you used to explain what is going on in your heart. Wonderful write! |
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