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Broken Heart
Contributed by
mali
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Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 05:25:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As she cries and falls to sleep
Her eyes slowly start to weep
She dreams of the better things that could be
Like falling in love and sand on the beach
As she wakes from her fantasy
She gets ready and decides to leave
She acts like everything is fine
But inside her, she is ready to die
Because no matter, how hard she tries
You can still see, the saddness in her eyes
Her heart just cannot take it anymore
Nothing is right, and so much of her is tore
To her no one cares, her life has faded
Her life is more than pain, its complicated
She is lost, depressed and sure
That she doesnt need to live anymore
She opens her heart and looks inside
And remembers theres still hope in life
To move on from this phase shes going through
To let go of the past, and the memories too
Even though theres no one supporting her
Loving her, Kissing her
She still tries to keep her faith apart
Of her life, in her broken heart.
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mali
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2006-12-11 05:25:32]
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Re: Broken Heart
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 05:47:54 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
It only takes the faith of one mustard seed.
huggs, prayer,
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Re: Broken Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:29:26 AM AEST
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very sad and powerful write.. this is something you can feel and i can relate to this.. i used to feel this way myself. awesome job
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Re: Broken Heart
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 11:16:29 AM AEST
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Sad but a very good write...
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