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I Am Villian
Contributed by
Ratwick
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Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 01:29:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Did I sleep last night? I dare not say.
Because Truth, behold, be told a Lie
My souls awakened, akin to die so ***** it...
I'll watch it die.
I am up tomorrow
Brought forth by pay
Another time another dollar
My collars dirtied by the day, and last night..
I thought that I heard you say ,"come here"
But you didn't,and I stayed, so ***** it...
I guess (PLEASE NO)
This is goodbye
I'll be down tonight
Brought up by the slaves
Will I sleep this time? That depends upon my waves
See I make believe I can make Belief believe that not only is the glass half full..
it is also neverending, so ***** it
I'll gulp it down and drown tonight
I am up tonight
Brought down my own way
The daggers I've spat have come back for my slay
Because Truth be told, beholds The Lie
My souls been half bled, I am Villian, God sent...so ***** it
I'll watch it die
Sean MacLeod
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Ratwick
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Re: I Am Villian
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 01:52:32 AM AEST
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Wow that was deeper than I actually fully understood. Well written. I hope you sleep well tonight and wake rested in the morn.
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Re: I Am Villian
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by lost_chadow on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 05:02:30 PM AEST
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| Yup, hands up to all the villains, just villeins on someone else's brain. But in all seriousness...that was hotta than Hawaii and deeper than the gutta. |
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Re: I Am Villian
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 01:26:17 PM AEST
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Very dark and pyscho-sociopathic...
The censor probably took out 'fuggit' however in my humbled opinion the piece reads well without the expletive please consider that vulgar language limits the connotations a poem can unfurl so it catches the readers imagination and travel deeper into your effort.
I like the poetic voice that stems from your brain which branches out and becomes a forrest of things to explore just around the corner.
Peace
Yang |
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