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surprise endings
Contributed by
xsitm
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Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 12:58:59 AM in AEST
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It’s illusions in darkened rooms and shadows on the wall
Illuminating hidden meanings and words I’ve long forgot
So maybe you could tell me what I believe better than me
But all you need to know is I just believe in what I've seen
So I write these lyrics and channel spirits through my lonely mind
And to keep me company I’ll always have precious father time
To comfort me as my loves leave,
Through wooden caskets and human ashes poured into the sea
Now here I am alone
Hanging on to war torn ships I’ve built my life around
And were all sinking down
Were all sinking down
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xsitm
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2006-12-11 00:58:59]
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Re: surprise endings
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 01:13:51 AM AEST
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Very sad but brilliantly writen.
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Re: surprise endings
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by Ratwick on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 01:44:10 AM AEST
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Man, I like that. I dont have anyting poetic to say other than I like that. I had a surprise ending myself recently. And if that is a song I want to hear it! Thanks for writing that!
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Re: surprise endings
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:39:58 AM AEST
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very powerful and yet so sad.. i like the flow of this and how its short but powerful great job
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