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your own downfall that you make
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:49:32 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Searching for something
that fills the ache
but you see the inside
you cannot take
what you've misplaced
the wounds inflicted to yourself cannot be erased
your own downfall you demised
You cannot take back that which you alone erased
you cannot take what you alone misplaced
you cannot fill a void when you emptied yourself out
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 01:48:25 AM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written.
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 02:06:34 PM AEST
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Jenni,
a involved write here nicely done. I do agree.
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by WhitePlacid on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 06:00:51 AM AEST
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| nice one Jenni! |
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 10:36:05 AM AEST
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sad yet but true what your saying.
nice job JENNI.
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 05:17:23 PM AEST
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Your words are pretty spot on my dear friend. I love the way you have penned this write.
Keep up the great work~
big warm huggers,
sue m |
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by Leslie on
Saturday, 23rd December 2006 @ 02:35:13 PM AEST
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| But you can begin again and not repeat the same mistakes. Your well written poem was very thought provoking. |
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by Spike on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 07:43:56 PM AEST
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Well said, Jenni, and so true. Happy 2007.
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Re: your own downfall that you make
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 12:21:36 AM AEST
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This is so compelling i was stuck in the middle of reading it my eyes couldn't move to the next verse. Absolutely mind provoking i kept reading the line over and over like a visual broken record. Your amazing.
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