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lonely
Contributed by
tawakwan
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i sink further and further into the infinite darkness of my solitude.
More and more i feel the redemption.
my heart slowly crumbles under the wave of tears,and i consider the flight into the black hole of death.
i once again think of the isolation.
is there anybody out there willing to take the hand releasing the poisonous bottle and freeing me from this prison?
is there anyone strong enough to give me strength to fight the lone wolf?
it seems i cannot go on.
like a bird that has broken it's wings,i am unable to reach the stars.
so as i recess to the most holy place,and my body becomes trapped upon the seaweed
as it mortifies my flesh.
I withdraw into the cloister of my spirit,and remain...
lonely.
Copyright ©
tawakwan
... [
2003-02-19 07:40:00]
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Re: lonely
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 08:38:56 AM AEST
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| aawww this was painfull,so very sad I wish for brighter days for you ahead! Much feeling into this! Christina |
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Re: lonely
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by tawakwan on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:57:46 PM AEST
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| thanks chirstina.i my have found brighter days. |
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Re: lonely
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:37:25 PM AEST
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Wow I liked this thnx for sharing this brings tears into my eyes. Goodness wow...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: lonely
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by tawakwan on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:01:29 PM AEST
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| thanks bobo.feel kind of bad about making a clown cry. |
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