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A Heart's Desire
Contributed by
lizabeth283
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Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:17:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to shield you from the world –
To take away your sorrow
Anything to let you know
I’ll love you each tomorrow
I want to tell you how I feel –
When I look into your eyes
A place of safety I can go
Resembling heavens’ skies
I want to spend my life with you –
Through times of thick and thin
As long as you are by my side
There’s nothing we can’t win
I want to make you recognize –
Your heart is made of gold
A son of God, my other half
Together ‘til we’re old
Then I will take you by the hand –
In that Celestial realm of glory
To live forever with my love
The perfect end to begin our story
Copyright ©
lizabeth283
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2006-12-10 19:17:33]
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Re: A Heart's Desire
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:30:42 PM AEST
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easily followed flow, great depth of meaning,,,I say, " What are you waiting for?". I hope your fiance knows what a gentle poetic soul he has been gifted w/ in you!!!
The warm fuzzys abound w/ the reading of this.Good job!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: A Heart's Desire
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:39:10 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem. I do hope that you give this to him. I know for sure that he will enjoy it as much as most of the poets that read it on here will.
Keep writing like this.
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Re: A Heart's Desire
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:51:13 PM AEST
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very emotinally felt and very powerful.. it has a very nice flow and beautiful wording.. i think its great as is myself.. great job and great expression Im sure your fiance will love this..
Enchanting write indeed
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Re: A Heart's Desire
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by Shyness on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 12:34:54 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem, and I think he will like it to. I could realy feel the emotion when I was reading this one. Great write!! |
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