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When the Smoke Clears.....
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 06:49:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Everything is Foggy,
I can't see where Im Going.
I walk Slowly,
So I don't Stumble.
Up Ahead,
The Smoke begins to Clear,
And I see the Turmoil of my Life
And the Pain my friends Endure.
I look Around,
Its a blood-soaked Battleground,
Many Fought,
Many Died,
And Yet,
Here I Am.
Standing my Ground,
These Demons tried to take Me,
But I wouldn't let that Be.
When the Smoke Clears,
I see the flawless blue Sky,
A tear falls from my Eye,
And I think of those I've Lost.
Looking around this Scene,
It all looks Sooo...
Soo Surrene.
Many have Paid for my Sins,
Paid with their Blood.
And their loss is my Burden.
But I will not let it Take Me,
I will Carry it with Me,
It will be my Stigmata.
When the Smoke Clears,
I see my Life in Ruin,
But I begin to Pick up the Pieces,
And Start Anew.
When the Smoke Clears....
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2006-12-10 18:49:57]
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Re: When the Smoke Clears.....
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:06:33 PM AEST
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As, "outcome" rarely concerns itself w/ blame, I'm glad to see that..."When the Smoke Clears..."you too seem to be ready to move on & not waste your time w/ this peticular excercise in futility...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: When the Smoke Clears.....
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:29:12 PM AEST
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Incredible and moving write. You are strong and yes the smoke always seems to clear.
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Re: When the Smoke Clears.....
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:50:08 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I love poems that come from sad times because it shows the deep insides of the human race.
Keep writing, it clears the soul.
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Re: When the Smoke Clears.....
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:53:28 PM AEST
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wow very powerful write.. so full of sadness. don't give up hope.. everyone goes through rough times and in those times we need the Hope and guidance of God. very nice flow to your poem and i hope things get better.. very emotional write also.. i enjoyed this piece you can defiantely feel the pain .. hang in there and don't give up hope and trust in God
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Re: When the Smoke Clears.....
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 05:30:23 AM AEST
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Hang tuff, my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Very moving write.
huggs, prayer,
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Re: When the Smoke Clears.....
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by MandiLee on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 08:39:01 PM AEST
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it's so beautiful! you have no idea how much i love this poem! how have been lately?
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