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This Day
Contributed by
errious
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Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 06:35:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This world has become a twisted place.
Trust is among the minority.
Every day starts and every day ends.
Every night passes in elegance.
But some wake and that day will be their last
But death is not the worst thing in life.
The worst thing in life is living it.
Copyright ©
errious
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2006-12-10 06:35:54]
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Re: This Day
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by NDean on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:23:14 AM AEST
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I remember you showing me this before you posted it. I think it shows a deep aspect of our society and its simplicity and the layout of the words (syntax) help show that.
Well done. Good Poem
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Re: This Day
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:58:45 PM AEST
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very powerful for such a short write.. well put and nice flow thanks for sharing
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Re: This Day
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by whoisthismystery on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 07:54:23 PM AEST
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| amazingly built with nothing but the truth etched into its words |
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