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Shadow Haiku
Contributed by
NDean
on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 08:29:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Within the shadow
I see a new vision
It looks at me in awe
Copyright ©
NDean
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2006-12-09 08:29:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shadow Haiku
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 09:04:01 AM AEST (User
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i like this poem, however a haiku is supposed to have 3 lines of 5,7,5 syllables...
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